Please roast my 2-min Product video

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I'm launching a AppSumo Select campaign soon, and here's the first draft of the product video.Please roast it, tear it down, give 100% hard-hitting, no-holds-barred feedback.*What can we improve?* How do we make it more clear and impactful?The video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M6bNnzvIgbg

Jugurtha · Accepted Answer

0. This is not a review as the title states; this is a sales pitch with a call to action (buy now).1. Have you used the product you're selling (video editing software) to produce this video? If not, why not?

Please roast my 2-min Product video

I'm launching a AppSumo Select campaign soon, and here's the first draft of the product video.
Please roast it, tear it down, give 100% hard-hitting, no-holds-barred feedback.
What can we improve? How do we make it more clear and impactful?
The video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M6bNnzvIgbg

0. This is not a review as the title states; this is a sales pitch with a call to action (buy now).
1. Have you used the product you're selling (video editing software) to produce this video? If not, why not?