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📣 mattbrgr

Feedback on a cash flow management tool


Hi all, I'm launching a cash flow management tool for seed & series A startups.

-> https://www.getmentium.io/

The idea: A single place to manage vendors, contracts & bills. No more overpaying. Cash flow forecasting. Integrations with accounting tools and a chatgpt like bot that will allow you to talk to your data.

Would love some feedback on this. Many thanks!


  👤 syndicatedjelly Accepted Answer ✓
1) Fix the typos. Make the sentences sound more formal, not like you’re talking to a friend.

2) More details - “our algorithm makes sure you’re not being overcharged” sounds patronizing. Your target audience is not going to be so dull as to not question how things work behind the scenes. They don’t have time to schedule a call and hear the sales pitch