https://www.friendlyskies.net/notebook/pine-needles-part-one
It's sort of like an MVP (except your story is a novel creation that you're writing as art and not as a utility or "something people want") with a lot of bugs.
A really short:
The wanderer froze. The site before a wonder. For a moment, the intent of passage was lost, and a belonging to nowhere was overcome with belonging everywhere. Then the moment past. The horizon was seen elsewhere as empty and far off. A long road lay ahead.