I would switch to code review style tools, but none of the people I send these drafts to are technical in any way, so things like GitHub are out. We're sort of remote, so old-school paper drafts are out (as much fun as that would be). Email threading would probably be a good option, but I find it super unwieldy after one or two comments.
Are there any good options? What do you folks use?
e.g.: https://github.com/ONLYOFFICE/docker-onlyoffice-nextcloud